Blog 9

What interesting place would you like to visit? Why?

Dear all,

Write a paragraph about “An interesting place you would like to visit”.  Say why you would like to visit it.

Tip: Read the reading of Lesson D, unit 6 of your book. That will help with ideas

Remember! Try to write the best you can.

Your post should be done in no less than 60 words. Write and publish it as soon as it is possible.

Deadline: Friday 13/05/2016 

Read the paragraph below. Can you find mistakes? How many? Can you correct them
  • I would like to visit disney land because i believe the magic, love, imagination and special in mickey mouse. This place are very interesting and amazing because there are games, magical place, entertainment, place where you can buy differente things of disney and the best you can see mickey mouse and his friends. Although I am adult, I want to go to disney land. 
  • I would like to visit a place, where have many landscapes and her culture on them,as  the citadel of Machu Picchu,because  I have seen  reports,photos. There are so many beautiful places to know,but Machu Picchu i like a lot of. 
  • In front of the main square is the Cuzco’s Cathedral. 
I want to visit Italy, especially in Rome, because I think a place interesting for its culture and customs. It is the fourth most populous city in the European Union. It has a mild Mediterranean climate especially in the period of spring and autumn.
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The best Writing
Hi guys, I would like to visit Cuzco. It’s one of the most important cities in Perú. Cuzco is located in the southeast of Perú. Many people visit cuzco because it has one of the world modern wonder. The tour is about 2 days. The first day, the tour begins in Cuzcotown at the main square. In front of the main square is the Cuzco’s Cathedral. Opposite the Cathedral, visitors can see the Municipality. The tour continues outside the city; on the east, we should travel through the Sacred Valley of Incas. The second day, if we want to go to Machupicchu, we should return to the city and go to the train station. The trip is about 5 hours, then you will arrive to Machupicchu where you will enjoy all the beautiful view and see all the arqueological rest.
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  1. I think the country I would like to visit most is China. It’s somewhere that I’ve always been fascinated and I would love to go and see one day. I’m not totally sure how the climate is in China. I guess because it is such a vast country that the weather varies quite a lot depending on where you are. I do know that some areas such as Hong Kong and Beijing can be hot and humid in the summer and so I suppose the best time to travel may be in the spring or autumn when it’s slightly cooler. I wouldn’t like to go in the winter because the days are shorter.
    What would I do there? Well, I’d try and see the sights. Normally I’m an adventurous traveller and I don’t like being part of tour group. But if I did ever go to China I would probably do it as part of a package tour because that way I would get to visit all the major destinations. You can’t go there and not see the Great Wall and the Forbidden Palace. I think the main problem for me, would be the language. It’s hard to explain why China is my dream destination. It may be that it’s so exotic, well at any rate I’m sure that it would be a real experience.

  2. Full name: Daniel ROJAS Mendez

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